Apple·apple.com·2024-06-10
Apple Intelligence press release
58/ 100 · Mixed
Polished prose, weak structure. Apple's brand voice resists the atomic style — every sentence is marketing, not citation.
View original ↗What it gets right
- Strong canonical newsroom URL pattern
- Consistent date and author metadata
What it misses
- Marketing adjectives in place of facts
- Quotes are corporate, not citeable
- No JSON-LD beyond NewsArticle basics
The fix
Pair the marketing prose with a 'Facts' subhead containing 8–10 atomic claims with numbers.
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